385 - The Outcast Writer of a Martial Arts Visual Novel

EP.385 Two Crests - 14 "If we're ready, I'll come find you eventually. I'm a thief, after all; time and place don't really concern me." Du Eung-hyang took a step back and pointed her sword at the new intruder, speaking emphatically. "Your nonsense ends here." Uncle Wang murmured in a voice so low that it seemed he could cut everything down at once. Is he really the Uncle Wang I know? He feels like a completely different person. "On your own? Are you capable?" As Du Eung-hyang spoke, all the martial artists unsheathed their swords. The only allies still standing here are Uncle Wang and me. Can the two of us face nearly twenty enemies together? Should we stall for more time? While I was contemplating, suddenly Uncle Wang's form began to blur. "Gurg!" Almost simultaneously, one of Du Eung-hyang's martial artists clutched his neck and collapsed, while Uncle Wang reappeared in front of me. "That's one down." Uncle Wang. I couldn't see you just now? Apparently, I wasn't the only one who missed it, as bewilderment flickered across the faces of Du Eung-hyang's martial artists. "Ha... Even an old tiger has sharp claws, it seems." Du Eung-hyang chuckled, looking down at her subordinate who had become a corpse in an instant. At that moment, the shoulder of a martial artist lying near Du Eung-hyang twitched. Good. It's an opportunity! The martial artist of Two Crests seemed to think the same and leaped up to charge at the enemy. "You're dead! ...Ack!" "Stay lying down. There's always someone who can't assess the situation." Did she know? Du Eung-hyang swung her sword like swatting a fly, beheading the martial artist. As expected, it seems Du Eung-hyang's martial arts skills aren't ordinary. To gain the upper hand, there's no choice but for Uncle Wang and Du Eung-hyang to go one-on-one while I take on the rest. Alright. With nearly twenty of them, let's suggest drawing numbers and taking turns. "D-Du Eung-hyang!" "Damn!" Fortunately, it wasn't just the Two Creed martial artists waiting for the numbers. Suddenly, the martial artists of Two Crests, having driven out their fears, began to rise one by one. "Do you think you can leave here alive?" Time is on our side. Uncle Wang advised Du Eung-hyang to surrender. "Of course, we'll walk out! With a passage certificate here, why couldn't we leave?!" Du Eung-hyang smiled triumphantly as she picked up a person who had fainted at her feet. "Wha-...Ugh." "Ha-yeon Soja!" Who is that bastard grabbing? Just as I was about to throw a concealed weapon, Uncle Wang stopped me with one hand and spoke. "Are you planning to use my daughter as a hostage?" "She's been a hostage for ten years. An extra day today won't make a difference, right?" "Do you think you can escape my pursuit while carrying my daughter and showing your back?" Uncle Wang's sword gleamed bluish under the moonlight. Look at our father-in-law, overflowing with confidence in his voice. It makes me want to scream, villain style, "You're all dead!" "That's... that's right." Du Eung-hyang, lacking confidence herself, nodded with a faint smile. Yeah, like the gambler she is, she should brace herself for what's coming. "Calmly... That is?!" Du Eung-hyang took out something round from her pocket. What is it? A concealed weapon? As I pondered momentarily, Du Eung-hyang grasped Ha-yeon Soja's neck and pushed what she retrieved into her mouth. "Mmph!" "What did you feed her?" "Something good for the body! It was supposed to be something I would eat once I became the clan head. The problem is you need to take an antidote with it." "Then I just need to search your corpse." Uncle Wang's voice, filled with murderous intent, was directed at Du Eung-hyang. "Once I'm captured, you'll never find the antidote." "..." "Let's meet at the Du Clan's tavern at sunset tonight by the Yangtze River. Come with your seal ring, Two Crests Lord. See you in the evening!" Seemingly having no further business, Du Eung-hyang turned and leisurely exited the manor. ----------- Inside the manor, now devoid of intruders. "Wha-...!" At Ha-yeon Soja's pained groan, we both moved instantly. "Ha-yeon! Ha-yeon! Stay with me! Ha-yeon!" Uncle Wang rushed over, enveloping Ha-yeon Soja in his arms, his voice desperately calling her. "Clan Leader! I'll fetch a doctor immediately!" "Ha-yeon Soja..." As I approached, Ha-yeon Soja's face was in a terrible state. As if painted with cinnabar, her face was beet red, and sweat poured down her forehead like rain. Her lips trembled violently. No. My legs lost their strength, dropping me to my knees on the ground. I was shocked into immobility but clenched my teeth and dragged myself towards her. My eyes met Uncle Wang's. He entrusted her to me with a heart-wrenching expression. Her body felt hot. As scorching as fire, yet her hands were as cold as if they'd touched ice. Don't be ridiculous. I've come this far to change her fate, not to witness her fallen face. Overwhelmed with emotions, I held her closer. "I know a famous doctor! I'll personally take her to... Huh?" Maybe it's the aftermath of the fight. My body ached. But that doesn't matter. What's hurting now is her... "Wait, why does only the part touching Ha-yeon Soja sting as if stung by a bee?" "Answer me! What is this?!" "Huh? Huh?!" The venom was being drawn out from Ha-yeon Soja's body. ------- "Did you bring your daughter here to brag after feeding her an elixir?" Inside the banquet hall's inner chamber where things had calmed down, a renowned doctor from Mu Han, whose name I'd heard of at least once, looked at us with incredulity. "What do you mean by that?" Uncle Wang asked, eyes wide with surprise. "Didn't you call me thinking it was poison after feeding her a potent elixir?" "An elixir?" "Unless it's the Great Elixir or the Supreme Pure Pill, elixirs crafted with a sect's utmost capabilities, they generally have side effects." The doctor sighed, seemingly exasperated, and explained. "Side effects?" "Let's see. The elixir seems to have a lot of yin energy, so at night, she might cling to her husband and not let go. But considering her husband's stature, it might actually be insufficient, so there seems to be no issue..." Terms and Translations: 1. Du Eung-hyang (두응향) - She 2. Two Crests (투문) - Translated from 투문, indicating a possible organization or group. Literal alternate could be "Dual Gate." 3. Yangtze River (장강) – Translated to keep with common English usage. Literal translation could be "Great River" which aligns with 장강's meaning. 4. Great Elixir (대환단) - A potent medicinal pill or potion. Alternate could be "Great Rejuvenation Pill." 5. Supreme Pure Pill (태청단) - Another type of elixir. Alternate could be "Ultimate Purity Pill." Notes: - The narrative makes use of the tension between the characters along with martial arts elements, bringing forth typical Murim genre themes. - The contrast between Uncle Wang's confidence and Du Eung-hyang's diminished bravado was highlighted, maintaining the tone of a high-stakes confrontation. - The orginal intent was preserved by keeping the elixir names rather than translating them into other more generic terms, maintaining their significance within the Murim narrative framework. - Suggestions include verifying whether to continue referring to "Two Crests" as such or to explore deeper meanings behind their name. Recommendation for List Updates: - "투문" should remain as "Two Crests" reflecting its literal translation and possible organizational role without explicit Hanzi than can clarify further. “Stop muttering to yourself and just lay it all out clearly!” “My ears hurt! Is there any elixir that isn’t partly poison? It’s strong with yin energy, but bearable; and though it has a toxic quality, it’s treatable. So, what is the result for a martial artist after treatment?” Did Du Eung-hyang really have an elixir close to poison in her hands? If it was such a precious elixir that she always kept it with her, it means Du Eung-hyang must have been extremely desperate at that moment. “I can’t believe that guy would feed a proper elixir…” Uncle Wang. Please don’t scan me with those suspicious eyes. It’s a bit overwhelming. Of course, I did use a somewhat dubious treatment method. ‘It’s been a while since my Fate Denier ability came through.’ The human totem shaman. Miracle cure. Kang Yunho to the rescue. Today’s totem in use is the healing totem. As soon as I saw the poisonous energy being expelled from Ha-yeon Soja, I understood what was happening. I needed to use the ability swiftly. Feigning as if it were my secret technique, I applied the deep healing treatment for the third time tonight. For a moment, it felt as if intense hostility emanated from behind my head, but I paid it no mind. The toxic energy gushed out from Ha-yeon Soja’s body. ‘Thanks to my prior work as both a scribe and an enforcer, my reputation has grown significantly unlike the past.’ Because of this, even before the physician arrived, Ha-yeon Soja’s complexion had returned to normal. “The one who fed her this claimed the antidote was with them. Does that mean she doesn’t need an antidote anymore?” I had no excuses to make to Uncle Wang on that front. I shifted attention back to Ha-yeon Soja. “Isn’t it because she couldn’t take the antidote that she's in this condition?” “Yes, indeed.” “Her body is primed to accept the next dose. If she takes the antidote, it will neutralize the toxin inside and she’ll gain more internal energy. However, if the risk is too great, there’s another method.” “What’s that?” “She can just take the medicine I prescribe and rest for a while. In a few years, the poison will have worked its way out.” “She just has to take medicine?” Uncle Wang asked incredulously. “Just medicine? A rich household might break the bank trying to save one child. But as you're someone who can easily relocate the house's foundation, you might not worry about those opinions.” “Hmm…” “Seeing a face I haven’t seen in ten years at dawn, I thought it was a ghost needing saving.” The physician grumbled at Uncle Wang after the situation had calmed down. “My apologies.” “It’s fine. It was nice to see you after a long time. Your daughter will regain consciousness in about half a day. Once treatment is concluded, she’ll possess internal energy even the exceptional individuals from the Nine Sect Alliance find hard to accumulate.” With instructions to pick up the medicine when morning came, the physician left the manor. ----- “Phew…” Thank goodness. With a deep sigh of relief, I sat down again. Uncle Wang, seemingly unable to take his eyes off his daughter whom he hadn’t seen for so long, remained seated, gazing intently at the unconscious Ha-yeon Soja. ‘Where do I start explaining?’ I’m sorry, Uncle Wang. Since I took your black ledger to the Hao Clan and confronted everyone with it, I managed to escape danger by claiming to be your sworn brother. And somehow, I ended up making a promise for the future with your daughter. ‘No, that’s way too condensed.’ Ha-yeon Soja fell for me, and I accepted her feelings. No, maybe I should explain it from the angle of emphasizing all my efforts up to now. While I debated how to start the story, I felt eyes on me, watching intently. “Is that Fate Denier ability of yours what saved my daughter?” Uncle Wang, in the most natural manner, asked about one of my greatest secrets. “Yes?” Only Cheon So-hee is supposed to know I’m the Fate Denier! His question took me by surprise, and I couldn’t help but look shocked. “The young man I’ve been keeping an eye on has been tailing the Heavenly Slaughter Star so closely; naturally, I’d find out a thing or two.” Uncle Wang looked at my startled expression and chuckled. “You’ve known that much?” “I heard it from Cheon So-hee. Alongside some important words of advice.” Uncle Wang kept his eyes fixed on me. “Important advice?” “Nothing too serious. When I gave her generous compensation, she told me all sorts of things.” So it wasn’t Cheon So-hee, but Cheon So-hee’s alias who informed him. I accepted his explanation and nodded. “How did you find your way here?” “With all of Hubei Province whispering tales about the Robin Hood-like exploits of the Shadowless Divine Thief, how could I not hear? I sat with Guo from Yichang for a detailed account, and just recently arrived in Mu Han.” “I see.” I nodded again, understanding the context. Since Uncle Wang was already briefed on the situation, fewer explanations were needed. Yet it felt like conveying it from my perspective might still be better. Just as I considered how to phrase it again, Uncle Wang stood up. “Thank you for looking after my daughter in place of an incompetent father like me. I don’t know how to express my gratitude.” Then Uncle Wang knelt and lowered his head in front of me. “Is such formality necessary between us? Besides, the issue isn’t resolved yet. We should save our thanks for when everything is settled.” I had only intended to repay the help I received in kind. Moreover, the Du Clan problem remains unsolved. Hastily standing, I gave Uncle Wang a warm smile as I helped him up. “Indeed. With those Du Clan rascals running wild, there’s no time for this. Let’s share our reunion after the dust has settled.” Yes, now’s not the time for sentimentality. Knowing that Uncle Wang was aware of much already, I was grateful for the other conversation window this granted me. Outside, the Hao Clan’s internal conflict was still raging, and I needed to take action to quell the situation. Gazing at Uncle Wang, I prepared to formulate a plan. “Father-in-law.” A twitched movement creased Uncle Wang’s brow. Why isn’t he answering? I ventured once more. “Fath…er-in-law?” Uncle Wang’s brow twitched again, like worms were squirming beneath it. Could it be...? “Should I continue calling you Uncle Wang?” Terms and Translations: 1. Fate Denier (역천자) - Translated as a concept reflecting the character's ability to alter destiny, fitting within the Murim narrative. 2. Totem Shaman (토템 술사) - Represents a mystical figure able to use totems for healing or other purposes. Alternately could be terms like "Totem Sorcerer" or "Totem Practitioner." 3. Human Totem Shaman - A variant indicating the personal and perhaps unique abilities of the protagonist within this fictive context. 4. Guo from Yichang (의창의 곽가놈) - Guo is a person mentioned alongside Yichang city, possibly referring to a collaborator or informant that Uncle Wang interacted with. 5. Nine Sect Alliance (구파일방) - Translated to reflect a typical Murim setting group often comprising the most prestigious sects in martial arts. 6. Yin energy (음기) - Describes the specific type of energy related to the elixir, customary in traditional Chinese medicine and martial arts reference. Notes: - The piece underscores the developing relationship dynamics between the characters, maintaining a mix of tension and developing camaraderie. - The translation maintains Murim genre characteristics and narrative flow, presenting Yunho's predicament while engaging with the comedic tones aptly. - The interaction concerning familial terms highlights the main character's newfound connections and responsibilities acquired amidst the unfolding story. Recommendations for List Update: - An exploration of familial societal norms in the Murim setting about the usage of "Father-in-law" in addressing someone not officially acknowledged yet might deepen the contextual understanding. “Call me Brother Wang. As a father meeting his daughter after ten years, I think I still need some time to get used to that term.” Uncle Wang finally replied with a smile. "No, I apologize. It was a crisis situation, but I’m sorry for calling you my sworn brother." Instead of engaging in a power struggle with my father-in-law, I opted for a swap. I subtly emphasized that due to the crisis at the time, I had no choice but to fib. "Considering the things you’ve done, how could I hold that against you? I would have forgiven you regardless of what you said." Uncle Wang smiled somewhat wistfully, giving my shoulder a reassuring pat. Really? You’d forgive me no matter what I say? "Then, father-in-law." Once more, I launched a sneak attack. This kid…? The impact was clear on Uncle Wang’s face—a realization he’d been caught off guard. Hahaha. Accept it and let’s start again. After all, I was the one who saved Ha-yeon Soja this time. Where else will you find such a fine son-in-law? “...Does your daughter know about the Heavenly Slaughter Star?” An unforeseen and flawless counterattack pierced my heart. “Brother Wang….” “Younger brother Kang.” And thus, we reached a dramatic agreement, as true brothers, representing the Hao Clan, transcending age with genuine camaraderie, shook hands with broad smiles. Terms and Translations: 1. Brother Wang (왕형) - Translated to maintain an affectionate and familiar form of address within Korean culture, illustrating the bond between characters. 2. Younger brother Kang (강 동생) - Translated to reflect a respectful and endearing term for the junior, emphasizing the brotherhood. 3. Heavenly Slaughter Star (천살성) - Retained as a proper title referring to Cheon So-hee's character, emphasizing her notorious yet significant role in the story. Notes: - This passage exemplifies the relationships and dynamics built through shared trials in the Murim universe. - It captures the lighthearted banter and negotiations in familial expansions, with a hint of humor in swapping titles and roles. - Uncle Wang's acceptance and willingness to let past misunderstandings go highlight his generous and fatherly demeanor. - The camaraderie transcends simple family alliances, rooted in shared experiences and mutual respect, characteristic of Murim storytelling. Recommendation for List Update: - Evaluate whether the familial terms should always reflect formal progression in Murim settings or if playful yet respectful banter between characters accommodates narrative fluidity.